1: Society Society controls my self-image. Today everything is photoshopped, and many people are using makeup, surgery, and other treatments to get the ‘perfect’ face and body. It is difficult to love yourself as being when these images are having on you all over the place you look. Too often I compare myself to others. 2: My Family, My children see the nice in me. I am seen by them as the best version of myself. I am the most comfortable when I’m with them. They control me because they think the best of me and I feel like I need to prove them right.
I aim to be the best version of myself because of these. Represent the images in our culture of what women should appear to be, and the unattainable goal we put on ourselves to look like that. It symbolizes how once I take a look at those pictures it’s hard never to feel less than.
- Tell your client to survey the immediate pain, especially after stress
- Avoid harsh mechanised scrubbing of epidermis and picking lesions
- Dr. Deborah R. Spey
- Use a foam or gel cleanser. Use a cleanser that is not irritating and light for the pores and skin
- 10 drops patchouli essential essential oil
- Don’t dream your daily life, live your wish
This is precisely what they do in American Beauty. Acquired they spun that entire tale so you knew who wiped out Lester at the start of the movie, I’m not stating the film would’ve stunk, but it certainly would’ve been less interesting. A lot of what drove our interest in that film was, “How exactly does Lester die? For the stuff in Afghanistan and Los Angeles, I don’t think you need it.
It really is backstory and the majority of what’s shown is monotonous. This seems very much like the “passion project” problem I used to be describing yesterday. I can feel you exploring some really deep and significant issues and designs in the writing of this tale. I could tell that it’s moving you.
But now take a step back and put yourself in the reader’s shoes. We’ve a slow-moving, structurally confusing concept-less meditation on beliefs and family. That’s not an easy sell, neither is it an easy story to purchase in screenplay form (I could see this working more as a novel where you could get into these characters’ heads).
So the trick is trying to discover a stronger way into the story (an improved concept/hook) which allows one to do the same things you’re doing here, yet make it more market-friendly. Maybe you cross-cut a study into Kara’s murder with the two weeks leading up to her murder. Or something else completely maybe.
But I really do think there needs to be a more active story here, and not simply a look back at a couple’s relatively predictable life. I will say that the writing itself is strong, succinct, and professional though. While I didn’t respond to the story plot as highly as I would’ve wished, I experienced as if you were telling the exact story you wished to tell.